the humans are striving to live their life
the negative forces are too strong to desist
staying alive is the most difficult exercise
probability of tomorrow is ceasing to exist
we succumb to temptation, we succumb to fear
we succumb to worries, we succumb to despair
we keep falling for prey of others opinions of us
survival of fittest became survival of the wicked
though we feel alive and awake holding our breath
but the fact is that life is dying it own natural death
beautiful….!!!
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Thanks Aashmi…
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Phenomenal and true!
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thanks enigma….
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Amazing.
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WoW! So profound. It ends with a bang.
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Thanks a lot….glad that you read something….
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Well it’s the circle of influence. What goes around comes around.
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Oh that one….that ride is called….Tora Tora….
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Oh God ! you don’t stop do you…are you always this way or is it just me…Plane guy, I am still reading!
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So…. You found the tunnel….from you to real me….
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Oh yes I did…I was wondering who it was who was annoying me.
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Annoying…? Positive way or negative…?
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hmmm…neither…just annoying in a way I’d like to say “Very funny!” lol. But I hope I’ve not irked a new reader on my blog.:)
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Ot just created a spike….but with your poetry at the background….subsided quickly…..
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Thank you for your very positive comment. Good to know that you know my writing now. Hoping to hear more on my other writing.
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I loved that. Beautifully written. Hugs, Sue
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Thank you….Sue…..regards…..
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You are very welcome.
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Painfully true–I felt myself holding my breath as I read.
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oh …is it….?
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Touched me deeply! Irony but truth of present day..
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Hmmm….thanks for the agreement….MS….
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Very deep, and so magically written. Loved this!
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Thanks Rose……
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